Various corrections: Suwako's eye and mouth proportions in panel 1, Cirno's blush and Daiyousei's dress shading in panel 2, and Daiyousei's eyes in panel 4.

Moonspeaker said:

Various corrections: Suwako's eye and mouth proportions in panel 1, Cirno's blush and Daiyousei's dress shading in panel 2, and Daiyousei's eyes in panel 4.

All of which come together to make them all cuter.