Hard trans? That's rare.

HashireKazemeijin said:

Hard trans? That's rare.

It ain't hard trans if it ain't translated in the first place.

The artist (who is indonesian) has made this doujin fully in English.
But a KanColle fully in English, yes, that is rare.

I've seen that some of the pages are tagged with engrish.
Can anyone please point out which part is it? I'm not a native speaker myself so it doesn't sounds too weird for me.

Cassava said:

I've seen that some of the pages are tagged with engrish.
Can anyone please point out which part is it? I'm not a native speaker myself so it doesn't sounds too weird for me.

My guess is it's more like a grammatical error. I'm not a native speaker either but if I have to guess there's in panel 1:
"I can't hit it properly without thinking you as a target."

and panel 4:
"I'll wait in the lounge then."

firechikara said:

The artist (who is indonesian) has made this doujin fully in English.
But a KanColle fully in English, yes, that is rare.

I think so

Cassava said:

I've seen that some of the pages are tagged with engrish.
Can anyone please point out which part is it? I'm not a native speaker myself so it doesn't sounds too weird for me.

I'll point out the errors here and on the following pages. I like firechikara's style so I'll steal that.
I will also correct punctuation if correcting a non-punctuation error in the sentence, but punctuation-only errors will not be fixed, because there's a lot of them.

Panel 1:
"I can't hit it properly without thinking of you as the target."

Panel 4:
"I'll wait in the lounge then." as firechikara already noted.
("at the lounge" would also work.)

cirno_goes_in_fridge said:

Panel 1:
"I can't hit it properly without thinking of you as the target."

What does Kaga mean there, anyways? Does she have some sort of grudge against Akagi in firechikara's stuff?