Just putting up a translation I pulled from somewhere I can't remember...

I can't verify 100% the quality of the J-->E translation, but from the small bits of Japanese I can read and translate, it seems close enough. Damn Kanji though....

Anyways, I proofread and fixed bits of the translation I had since it was littered with grammar and English errors. Hopefully should be enough.

jump728 said:

Just putting up a translation I pulled from somewhere I can't remember...

I can't verify 100% the quality of the J-->E translation, but from the small bits of Japanese I can read and translate, it seems close enough. Damn Kanji though....

Anyways, I proofread and fixed bits of the translation I had since it was littered with grammar and English errors. Hopefully should be enough.

Some of the words are different because as you said, you fixed the grammar, but i assume you got it from Wakaba-tan.