I think there's something wonky with that translation in the second panel. It reads oddly.

NegativeSoul said:

I think there's something wonky with that translation in the second panel. It reads oddly.

It's technically correct, but the grammar I chose may be a bit too poetic/nonstandard. I was trying to keep it short and punchy, like the original Japanese.

Moonspeaker said:

It's technically correct, but the grammar I chose may be a bit too poetic/nonstandard. I was trying to keep it short and punchy, like the original Japanese.

You have to read it a few times to get the meaning but you're right, it is correct.