shirogane naoto, satonaka chie, kujikawa rise, amagi yukiko, hanamura yousuke, and 1 more (persona and 1 more) drawn by shirono

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    Ｐ４コピ本サンプル２。

    コピ本サンプル２。エロ的なものは期待しないで下さい。あと実際のゲームではバスタオル着用でした。が、あの位置だと千枝らには全開で見えてたんじゃないかと(苦笑)。※データ上書きしちゃって、りせのセリフを確認できないのが悔やまれる(´･ω･｀)　　　/いろんなタグどもです！アイドルなら水着撮影用に全処理してる人もい…ないか(笑)。つか休業中だし。乳は直＞雪＞り＞千＞菜のつもりで描きましたが、真実はいったいどうなんでしょうかね？

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    Matroska56
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    I think the key thing is what Chie says at the end, maybe what Rise says in response. Going off the game, at the start Rise says "Now then, let's all do our best deadman's float" or something like that, then when she pops up again I think she's saying something like "Why aren't you joining in?" Then she says "What's wrong?" but after that I have no idea.

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    Matroska56
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    In reference to the note about Chie's dialogue in the last panel, I think it does make sense. I feel like I'm stating the obvious here but since it does say "Both [meanings] make no sense" in the commentary of the translation...

    "No hair" means pubic hair and because Rise just lay back and opened her legs, they could all see that she was shaven. Because it's apparently a pun on "no injury", it can be used in as innuendo like that - though it's not as if what Rise did was particularly risky or anything, though even in the game it was presented as a pretty outlandish and quirky thing to do.

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    BakaHoushi
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    This may well go down as the worst joke in history, but I was trying to think of a way to "normalize" the joke into English as it seems to be one of the least translatable examples I've ever seen. But I was thinking something along the lines of "Well, I'm just glad you weren't actually in a hairy situation..."

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