@Yoshiciv
Look, "yume no tsuzuki" when used as part of a sentence is hard to translate "literally" without making the reader go "huh?" Seriously, "following the continuation of dream", really? Even the grammar's completely off!

Reverting to my earlier translation. If I have time I'll try to figure out something that adheres closer to the original sentence structure and literal individual definitions of each component word. But as it stands my earlier TL is far better than your... attempt, so a reversion is in order.

Swapped out "achieving" for "continuing". That should work for now.

NNescio said:

@Yoshiciv
Look, "yume no tsuzuki" when used as part of a sentence is hard to translate "literally" without making the reader go "huh?" Seriously, "following the continuation of dream", really? Even the grammar's completely off!

Reverting to my earlier translation. If I have time I'll try to figure out something that adheres closer to the original sentence structure and literal individual definitions of each component word. But as it stands my earlier TL is far better than your... attempt, so a reversion is in order.

OK. Thank you for the explanation.