Corrected a bit of grammar in the translation. "Right", as a verb, is used more to mean "to correct". If "Right" was meant as a noun, then one would need a verb, such as "doesn't look right", "doesn't seem right", etc. Unfortunately, I cannot translate Japanese, so I have no idea which is closer to the translation. But, in my experience translating other languages, you are usually more accurate when you use less words.