It's not that I don't appreciate the editing you've done, but if you're not fluent in English you should have someone else proof the script for you. You should also shrink the text so they don't become so stretched like that.

PC-translator or BabelFish?
English is NOT my native language, but even I
can tell that the translation sucks balls.
I appreciate the effort, though...

Indeed, the translation is off... by a lot. But I am sure that the meaning of the comic is well communicated.

How do I know?

Unzan is crying manly tears. Duh...

>I fell

This is below babelfish

Justy said:
PC-translator or BabelFish?
English is NOT my native language, but even I
can tell that the translation sucks balls.
I appreciate the effort, though...

Same. But... I don't like the way how this is edited...

Epic translation is epic. rofl

The funny part is that Izukon seems to be proud enough to slap his name as the "translator"

This is awesome!

Sorry if the translation is kinda off though, didn't have the will to perfectly do it for now. But thanks for the honesty xP

"didn't do it perfectly" is a tremendous understatement, izukon.

That mouse in the ending pannel wins.

The Translation is far off as I has seen the original Japanese version, and why would Shou attack Byakuren!?!

How do we know this was an accident?