Hello! I'm new around here. I translated this with my dubious Japanese skills and first after that did I read the howto:translate.
So... I hope I haven't offended anyone. Rather than deleting all the notes (which I wholeheartedly believe are correct), I'll leave the notes and the translation_request tag where it is, hoping that someone who knows what he's doing will check it for me.
Also, I made a wild guess about her name. :p
Next time I'll go about things differently. Sorry!
For getting translations checked, use the check_translation tag instead. For names, if you don't know what exactly it is, try running a Google search and see which is more common, or use something like http://nihongo.j-talk.com/kanji/.
However, you misread the ツ in the first panel as a シ. It's a smaller-size ツ, also, even if that's difficult to discern at that text size. So, that sfx would be バッ, not バシ.
WAAclickSound for impactKinoshita!WAAStart!A new record, 0.12 seconds!Amazing, Kinoshita-san!Kinoshita!YamadaKinoshita!