I'm sorry, sweetheart, but I feel that fucking the hell out of a woman only demeans whatever true feelings I may have for her. Instead, would it be okay if I gently placed you upon a soft surface in a dignified location, such as a bedroom, while I slowly, romantically penetrate you in the missionary position shortly after we've been wed?
No errors per se, but I don't think the writer was a native speaker; "and you won't quit" would be more natural as "and you aren't going to stop". (That last "to" probably bugs idiots who think there's a rule against it, too.)
