There were a few places where I found the lines a tad bit strange (including some typos), but this would explain why, I'm guessing this person's not a native Japanese?
I'm sorry that this is filled with assumptions fantasies, and story ideas an eighth-grader would use...! To tell the truth, it might be much worse than the Remilia and Flan book that I sold during the summer Comiket, but I have no regrets. This was fun.
This is some explanation about the story, but for the most part, Remi and Patchy have forgotten about Sakuya. You're probably saying, "Why the hell'd this happen?!" but I'll answer that, probably next time....
This is my first attempt on a long story.
I'm planning for a 3-part story, but for now stuff is undecided. It's a trilogy, but yet, I couldn't draw even a third of what I was planning...alas! The next one is probably going to be a bit thicker, I suppose. Every new volume might get thicker and uglier.
There's tons of loose ends and parts I need to do better on, but I'll try to use those to my advantage and make an even better story next time. Any ideas, comments, or criticism about this would be nice.
I'm especially open to criticisms. But first, I need to be able to use Japanese better....
