ナズが酔いが回ってどこか休める所に行きたいと言ったので宿を取ると

あの後、ナズが気分の不調を訴えて、宿を取り、その後気づくと・・・。 「なかなか悪くなかったよ。君のモノの具合は」 と、横で今まで交わっていた奴がにやりと笑った。どうしてこうなった。 「いいじゃないか。何事も経験だろう。」 気分が悪いから一緒に横になってくれと言われてベッドを共にして、気分が悪いと言われ抱きつかれて、胸をさすってくれと言われてさすってやって。そんな風にこいつの話を聞いている内にいつの間にか事に及んでいた訳である。 「ははは、君に弄られている内にその気になってしまってね。 　いやらしい手つきだったもので」 人が気を使って介抱していたと言うのに、変に甘い声とか出して、誘ったのはお前だろう？ 「君の初めての相手になってしまった。今どんな気持ちかな？」 とにやにやしながらナズは言った。うるさい奴だ。 しかし、こいつでもあんな声や表情を見せるものかと驚いてしまった。 行為を及んでいる時、僕を呼びながら抱きついて来る様は 正直な話、欲情をした。お子様体系のこいつには興味がなかったんだけどなぁ。 「酒のせいでつい派目をはずしてしまったよ。忘れてくれ給え。」 と顔を赤らめてナズは視線を外した。 生娘みたいに照れるなよ。キャラじゃないぞ。 「っ、失礼な奴だね、君は。私だって本当は・・・、いや、君の反応も可愛いものだったよ。ぎこちないキスをしてくれたじゃないか、どーてー君？」 ぐぬぬ・・・。 「まぁ、初めはそんなものさ。でもね、その調子じゃ、仮にご主人様と床を共にした時、色々困るんじゃないかな？。あの方は堅い人だし、君がリードしなければいけない。今の君にそれが出来るかい？」 ・・・無理な話である。 「だからこうしよう、たまに私と一夜を共にしないか。私が色々手解きしてあげるよ。」 目を光らせてナズは言った。 何を馬鹿な事言っているのか。こいつは？ 「君はご主人様を今のままで何とかできると思うのかい？」 そういわれると無理だ。今回はナズに言われるがままやっていただけだった。 仕方ない。よろしくお願いします。 「うんうん、人間素直が一番だよ。」 と満足気にナズは頷いた。 なぁ、ナズ。本当にいいのか？これ結構だらしない事だと思うのだが。 「小事だよ。大丈夫。二人だけの秘密さ。大した事じゃないよ。」 とふっとナズは笑った。ナズの提案に少し困惑を覚えながらも僕はわっふるわっふる

Nazu got drunk and said she wanted to go lie down somewhere so I took took her to an inn and...

After that, Nazu complained about feeling sick and after she realized I'd taken her to an inn...
"The way you've handled things isn't bad at all" she said to me while lying on her side, grinning and laughing.
How did it end up like this?
"Oh, come on. This is experience, too, you know."
She asked me to lie down with her because she was sick, so we were sharing the bed. She said she was sick and that I should hold her and stroke her chest, so I did. I was led along by her words and before I knew it we were in this situation.
"Hahaha, you touching me like this is putting me in the mood. Those are some dirty things you're doing with your hands."
'Despite someone working so hard to take care of you, you're using such a sweet voice, aren't you the one seducing me?'
"Will I be your first partner? I wonder how that must feel," she said while grinning.
'Oh, hush. I'm surprised to hear you say things like that with that face. I'm sorry but, even though hugging me and calling my name normally turns me on, I can't get excited because you look like a child.'
Nazu blushed and looked away, "The alcohol is making me do things I shouldn't. Please forget that for me."
'Don't shy away like you were some pure innocent girl. It's not like you.'
"tsk, you're a rude guy, you know that? I really am... nevermind, that was a cute thing you did. How about you try and kiss me, you virgin?"
I grumbled. (see note)
"Well, if you're going to be like that... But you know, let's say you're sharing a bed with my master. Aren't you going to have problems with an attitude like that? She's hard to budge, you have to take the lead with her. Can you do that with the way you are now?"
... an impossible conversation.
"So here's my plan, why don't you spend the night with me now and then? I'll show you the basics," Nazu said while watching me carefully.
'That's the dumbest thing I've ever heard. *You?*'
"Do you think you can handle my master the way you are now?"
She told me that and I knew it was hopeless. It would turn out exactly the way Nazu said it would.
'I guess there's no other way. Please treat me well.'
"There we go. It's best to work together," she said with a satisfied nod.
'Hey, Nazu. Is this really okay? I keep thinking it's a sinful thing to do.'
"Don't worry about it, it's nothing. It'll be our secret, not a big deal at all," she said, then suddenly burst out laughing. Even though I felt a little bewildered by her proposal...

(note: all the text says here is gununu... which has its own tag on danbooru. I refer you there. Or better yet, google image search ぐぬぬ, it's funnier that way. )

What did I do wrong? It took three tries to post that, it kept eating everything except the last line. And now it's below the threshold?

TubercularOx said:
What did I do wrong? It took three tries to post that, it kept eating everything except the last line. And now it's below the threshold?

Not sure why it's below the threshold, but for the vanishing text problem, refer to my comments on post #979313. You may have been experiencing something similar.

Thank you, that's exactly what happened. I suspect someone voted it down while it still said only, "Oh, hush," even though I'm pretty sure I hit post without bumping so maybe I just got really lucky on that.

Thanks for your hard work translating the mountains of text accompanying this series.

Thank you, I really appreciate the encouragement. I have to admit I'm in a little over my head. I'll stand by 99% of my translation, but that last percent scares me sometimes.

Just FYI, the "Gununu" meme only counts as such when accompanied by the particular facial expression seen in the images under that tag. By itself, it's just a grunt, so you can translated as "Grrr" or "Gnnnh" or similar.

I sweated over that one. gununu (or even gunu) isn't in my giongo/gitaigo dictionary. The meme overwhelms all other search results -- even the online japanese-japanese dictionaries define it only in reference to the meme (or don't have it at all). And this guy is an internet writer (waffle waffle?). Maybe I'm over reading it, but if someone wrote, "His hair told me he was the kind of guy who was never going to give me up," and posted it to 4chan, it'd be hard to believe that wasn't a reference to Rick Astley. So I do feel that knowing the meme is important to understanding the author's intention. Or at least, that it's a relevant translator's note. Maybe I should update it. Or maybe I just have...

I laugh at the NTR tag on pixiv.