Checked, only a bit of wording changes and adding Miko's speech endings, otherwise it's fine.
(Answer Honestly)AKAI HAATOMy homemade bug food looks
super delicious, doesn't it?(Stop her for once)AKAI HAATOWhat kind of choices did she have to take for that...I really want to know...Miko-senpai...Marine-tan?What's going on?Y-yeah-nye...Let's do it-nyeh!Next time we're on stage...
Will you sing while being electrocuted with me ?She said she's already cleared Haachama's route in her imaginary eroge, but...