I'm not an expert on this, but... @CodeKyuubi what do you think? Acceptable?
On occasion there are approvals of 'fixed' art but I think those usually happen with scans. Not all too sure what it's like for digital art although I'm completely fine with approving them, long as such a thing is specified and if it is of good quality.
The color palette of the edit looks fine, though I'm wondering why those red and blue almost-abberatic squares and outlines were added for.
The old color balance was indeed a bit overly blue, but it had its purpose with yorha lying in shade. The edited one looks more like the sun is at a lower angle, so that it still shines on her through the shade of the foliage.
All things said, I kinda feel the squares detract from an otherwise pretty edit.
The color palette of the edit looks fine, though I'm wondering why those red and blue almost-abberatic squares and outlines were added for.
The old color balance was indeed a bit overly blue, but it had its purpose with yorha lying in shade. The edited one looks more like the sun is at a lower angle, so that it still shines on her through the shade of the foliage.
All things said, I kinda feel the squares detract from an otherwise pretty edit.
I agree. I didn't notice, but that's a good point.
It's probably better to leave it as a comment then. I also had qualms about that aberratic outline around her body and some other minor details, so I can't really give this one grace.